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No excuse for what I deleted from here. No excuse for false information in an encyclopedia. It wasn't even funny. Ortolan88 thank you for deleting useless information. it helps a lot. and i agree. encyclopedia=true infomation

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I cut down on repetious and monotonous sentences, and fixed a lot of the grammar. I helped to improve the punctuation situation. I created some headings to help to put things in perspective, and stuff like that. Slater79 (talk) 02:40, 14 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Some minor grammatical edits (deleted some "who"s that made no sense) and made the possessive of Thomas correct (Strunk & White's very first rule in Elements of Style). Maybe someone should remove the note about the grammar needing to be fixed? 9:39 PM PST, Christmas 2008 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 154.20.23.251 (talk) 05:40, 26 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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